Lets just assume this is not the end. The Universe does give them a second. The story now doesn't seem that ordinary at all! Well the girl comes back and both confess their love and even went on a date. Now that sounds pretty ordinary, but when it is the first love it never is ordinary. The first teddy bear gift, the first lunch out and deciding to give long distance a shot. So.. so.. so.. and thus the long distance relation was sealed:)
Can their love survive the distance? Can any love survive the distance? One can only hope in love, to give up easily seems too dastardly and one must give love a chance. Somebody should. I'm glad they did.
Ex- boyfriend does lurk around somewhere waiting to play his role. Somebody should make this story un-ordinary ( I know there is no such term, but I prefer this to not-so- ordinary, so kindly bear) with ex boyfriend, boy and a girl it should make a perfect love triangle and there is nothing ordinary about a love triangle ( in spite of what Bollywood and Hollywood tells you).
So lets just assume love can survive distance and hope like a someone does in love and pray like someone in love and wait like someone in love.......
P.s. written on request for a sequel
1 comment:
lets say the ex-boyfriend had an ex-girlfriend. The ex-girlfriend also have another boyfriend who in turn has another girlfriend and this chain goes endless. I have observed such a way of life in western societies. They feel insecure, don't know what to offer to keep their relationship, body, mind, money..I am also afraid this kind of life is coming to our country as well. People involving in non-committed relationships.
Anyway, the second part of the story, you have messed up, you can write much better than this.
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